The feedback that I received was very helpful when it came to constructing my second elevator pitch. The feedback that I received helped me identify the strengths and the weaknesses of my first elevator pitch and I was able to try to modify what I said in the second one to cater to the weaknesses. I included how the business was going to wok specifically mentioning how the snack would be delivered in my second elevator pitch to clear up confusion. I thought all the feedback I received was very helpful and insightful and made me think deeper about my business.
Markemia, I think you have a great idea. You were very causal and genuine with your pitch which I like but may seem unprofessional to some. I would recommend a just little extra practice as I have found it to be helpful with mine. You might want to slow down your speech just a bit too. That's one of those things I have trouble with. Otherwise, great job. Here is a link to my disaster: http://guntotinghippie.blogspot.com/2016/02/elevator-pitch-no-2.html
I enjoyed watching your elevator pitch. I like how you took the comments from the first elevator pitch and used them to improve the second pitch. I can tell you are very passionate about your company and I think it is a great idea. I would love to be able to order my favorite snack at the touch of a button. Would your service be open 24 hours? The hours of operation are crucial when it comes to snacking.
Please check out my post at: http://prosper95.blogspot.com/2016/02/elevator-pitch-no-2.html
Hi Markemia, I thought you did an excellent job. I love your enthusiasm and the "think about it" thoughts you proposed as you offered your idea to us. I think you should elaborate more on how your product would stand out from the rest. Personally, though, I would love to be able to order my favorite snack. We both thought of delivery services and while your idea is different than mine, I believe we are both on a good track!
Here is mine if you're interested! http://myentrepreneurshipinizio.blogspot.com/2016/02/elevator-pitch-no-2.html
Markemia,
ReplyDeleteI think you have a great idea. You were very causal and genuine with your pitch which I like but may seem unprofessional to some. I would recommend a just little extra practice as I have found it to be helpful with mine. You might want to slow down your speech just a bit too. That's one of those things I have trouble with. Otherwise, great job. Here is a link to my disaster: http://guntotinghippie.blogspot.com/2016/02/elevator-pitch-no-2.html
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ReplyDeleteHello Markemia,
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed watching your elevator pitch. I like how you took the comments from the first elevator pitch and used them to improve the second pitch. I can tell you are very passionate about your company and I think it is a great idea. I would love to be able to order my favorite snack at the touch of a button. Would your service be open 24 hours? The hours of operation are crucial when it comes to snacking.
Please check out my post at: http://prosper95.blogspot.com/2016/02/elevator-pitch-no-2.html
Hi Markemia, I thought you did an excellent job. I love your enthusiasm and the "think about it" thoughts you proposed as you offered your idea to us. I think you should elaborate more on how your product would stand out from the rest. Personally, though, I would love to be able to order my favorite snack. We both thought of delivery services and while your idea is different than mine, I believe we are both on a good track!
ReplyDeleteHere is mine if you're interested!
http://myentrepreneurshipinizio.blogspot.com/2016/02/elevator-pitch-no-2.html